Complete adoration for this one love. quite sad really. but smile and let time mend. :D 5/5.

WOW...I didn't realize you was only 12...Great poem for your age...On the 4th stanza where it says "how sorry they were" Does it mean "how sorry he was???""
Just wondering cause it kind of through me off...Best of luck hun..
Tyanna

I can't imagine u can write this kind of poem at young age.. u really impress me and i admire ur work.. u know how to express how u feel in this poet..

This is a great poem! nice flow, and really paints a picture. thanks for the comment by the way

Wow awesome. it toucces my heart it was realy great work i loved you poem sewwt angel

That was amazing! very sweet! great imagery created in the poem! well done. I like the title too :) flow was good keep it up! keep writing! 5/5!

Omg!!......So sweetly penned!!!....beautiful work,...too good for words....beautiful imagery...kp it up!
it's soo touching!
xxPoojaxx

This is really cute. I found it to be nicely penned and showed relaly nice emotion. Well done with this poem it was an enjoyable read.
~mel

This is a very cute poem, and now one of my favorites, nicely worded, i loved it 5/5

OMG !! your so young and your poems are so sophisticated lol hahaha omg cant believe your skill you probs guna be published when youro lder you know. What a great poem hun

xxx alex xxx

This is a great poem full of love yet still sad. i really i like. and it made me think

5/5
so good i'm lost for words