by CHOKE Apr 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A door long left closed; reopened in every dream. |
by Dead Inside
I liked it even though i got a little confused in some places. Was this a dream you had or are you trying to describe an event that happened in your life. oh, and try not to force your rhymes so much. other than that, it was pretty good. |
I have to say I didn't like this one as much, a lot of the rhyming sounds forced, and the flow is terribly off at a few points. 4/5 |
by Stephanie
W0w! |
by Darien
Wow, this was an interesting poem. Confusing, but it really makes me think, and try to imagine it!.. Kind of like a weird nightmare. Good job on this one.. |