What a beautiful descriptive piece. Full of vivid imageryand beautiful word choices . 5/5 Debbie

Musically beautiful...Keep writing these good poems....take care and keep smiling...

Thats really beautiful

"Nature lulls,
tired minds
to a peaceful sleep."

That last three lines seems to lull the reader into a sense of security..
It's amazingly written sweets, you've used language that sounds.. almost magical. It's so beautiful..
A wonderful slice of nature =)
5/5
*Gem*

Chavii
Beautiful piece. Loved your word choices.

Take Care Cindy

A beautiful refreshing piece. Very soothing.

This was a rather mesmerizing piece of nature poetry. The peaceful tone and serene descriptions have enchanted me to a state of drowsiness. I was rendered speechless!
Well done upon writing some a wonderful poem.
Love,
Debbie

Hhhmmmm...i wish this could go on and on, what an ultimate piece of art shown here, such great words....simply adds so much more without an effort.

loved it

all the best and take care

Amazing, this peom was beautiful. I had to read this poem because of the title of it; its so beautiful

I really loved this poem I found it quite soothing! lol. well done, It really captures the beauty of nature

This is just really really beautiful. itz the best poem i'be read.

Its extremely short but its cute!!

I really like this kind of short but graceful poems. This one is too good! You've done a wonderful job!

Get writing some new poems you!! lol
*Gem*

A small beautiful piece which evokes the warmest feelings inside with the touch of a pen, great write xox lithium