Break My Heart {Lanturne}

by Natalie   Apr 15, 2007


..............You
..............Only
........Wanted to
..Break my heart in
...............Half

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Lanturne: A type of poetry in which when
it is centered, it resembles the Japanese
lantern. It has a strict syllable pattern of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.
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  • 17 years ago

    by xxKarma

    Wow thats so cool.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, Nat, it's been a while since I've read your poetry, and I just realized how deep your stuff really is. Keep on writing sis! You write way better poems than me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Nice pattern! Love it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Lanturnes are great little things.
    You've managed to say so much and convey so much emotion in 11 short syllables.
    Excellent
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by вℓєє∂ιиg.тєαяѕ ♥

    Awhh, Taleee. I haven't read your poetry in soo longg, but I miss itt. I loved thiss, it was so simple but had so much meaningg. Lovely poemm, Ily. 5/5

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