Trying out new styles is always a good thing love. This one really works for you. 5/5.

Although short it holds a lot of emotion in it. I really like your lanturnes, most people find it hard to get their point across unless it's a really long poem, haha I know I someties am like that, but your short poems like this are as strong as some peoples with like 16 lines. I liked this. Keep it up.

5.5

Awhh, Taleee. I haven't read your poetry in soo longg, but I miss itt. I loved thiss, it was so simple but had so much meaningg. Lovely poemm, Ily. 5/5

Lanturnes are great little things.
You've managed to say so much and convey so much emotion in 11 short syllables.
Excellent
5/5
*Gem*

Nice pattern! Love it! 5/5

Hmm, Nat, it's been a while since I've read your poetry, and I just realized how deep your stuff really is. Keep on writing sis! You write way better poems than me.

Wow thats so cool.