Lovely poem my dear. sorry about the uh feud or whatever it is. good luck with staying with whomever it is you want to stay with. 4/5 overall love. some of the lines just seemed so forced. but overall it was pretty good.

If you dont get criticism then you dont know how to improve. and yeah, you never know your life could change for the worst one day. it happening to a lot of people lately.

Yep, reality seems to wake people up; in the worst of ways! and when youre awaken you just wish you could go back to sleep to get away from the hell called life.

Actually, i in no way, want to end my life. im currently the happiest that ive ever been in my whole life. i just had to overcome a lot of obstacles to get to where i am today. and im glad that all of my suicide attempts failed in the past, because i have come to realize that life really is worth living.

Everything passes if you give it the chance. dont dwell over little things and dont dwell too long over anything at all. dont waste too much time out of your life being depressed or sad.

Yes its 5:59 AM here. im pretty tired also. nice meeting you too. good night :)