Your eyes were so cruel

by BlAcK RoSe   Apr 15, 2007


My heart broke when you walked out the door.

How can i forget you.

You were like a drug to me.

Why couldn't you want me like i want you.

Your eyes were so cruel when you left me.

You still walked away leaving me in this bed.

I still feel your touch and smell your aftershave on my pillow case.

There is so much that reminds me of you.

But if you called me now i would still say i am fine.

I will never let you know how much you hurt me.

There will be one day when i get over you.

I will move on.

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  • 17 years ago

    by June

    An excellent write ,you never forget a love but time is a healer and in time you gain the strength to move on.

  • 17 years ago

    by AloneInMySarrows

    This one is full emotion. I can definately relate. Only time heals wounds!

  • 17 years ago

    by April McLaren

    Nice job keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was a fine piece of work. Though it wasn't well-organized in its structure, I still thought it was rather written well but nevertheless it could be improved in some ways which could make a tremendous difference from what it is currently. Don't get me wrong, it is all right.
    overall, a nice write. keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
    Debbie

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