Philip [Acrostic]

by Debbie   Apr 15, 2007


Perhaps a seed was growing within, with
Hope and love filling the vibrant breeze.
In lucid resonance did I pause to breathe-
Longing to see your face again left me unease.
Ill health swept upon this broken spirit.
Poor weakling am I - a love demerit.

�© 2006 by Debbie de Lara

*written 1 year ago

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Absolutley wonderful, as usual lol. I love acrostic poems. They seem easy, but it's a lot harder to keep a nice flow with it's structure, without losing the depth of the piece. Anyway, you do it ever so gracefully. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Beautifully written love poem, emotions are well expressed.
    My favorite lines are:
    -Hope and Love filling the vibrant breeze.
    In lucid resonance did I pause to breathe;-
    This poem is simple, but great.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Is Philip a special guy? hihi Well you really have a excellent vocab. Choice of words was superb..

    Hope and Love filling the vibrant breeze.
    ^^ I really love that line.. It was really beautiful.

    5/5! as always.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    As i said before, your poems are a lesson, a lesson for poetry learners to take your path to be a successful poet like you. you are a great teacher who have gave alot to P&Q.

    this was another great poem by you dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sydney

    Deep. I like you choice of words. Wonderfully written. Great job : ]

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