Hey debie thanks for your comments, I give 5/5 for this, hope to see more of your pose,

Shows alot about your personality good job

Debbie what a lovely piece. The word choices are great.
Take Care Cindy

I really liked this poem, its been such a long time since I read an acrostic one especially one with a name.. beautiful images there.

You have a very high vocabulary.. sometimes i find myself going back to reread your work because i dont always understand it the first time. (i know who would admit that) anyway this was amazing! lots of emotion in it.. Keep up the wonderful work! 5/5

Again you have amazed me, the vocab was perfect, the flow flawlee, and the emtion was deep. I too have to read your poems twice sometimes,but mainly becaus4e I can't believe how perfect they seem to be. I am jealous.

Short n sweet...very good choice of words ...lovely n perfectly penned...the flow was also good...n lovely work...5/5!
Very sweet!
xxPoojaxx

This poem yet again has shocked me with it's wonderful vocab, the flow again was excellent. Short and sweet while you still manage to show so much emotion. Excellent job 5/5

Once again .. your poem has touched me .. I love the rhymes.. Im a big fan of them.. I especially loved the flow.. how it becomes suddenly so true .. love again.. good job and keep it up .. 5/5

Good poem.
Bree

It was ok.. but i know you can do better...

It's so sweet and touched ..
Good vocab too... ^^
But i love your other poem better..
Nice poem ^^

Once again, greatt poem! very good writter! Keep it up. 5/5

`-jackie.

Lmao Debbers uhm you have a comment on here saying "it was ok but I kno you can do better" hmm I am not going to go there. I found this to be quite amazing to tell you the truth. The emotion portrayed again was quite unique not many people can put such emotion in poetry. Great effort sweetie. Keep writing love ~mel

Put together so well enjoyed reading it short but very deep

Deep. I like you choice of words. Wonderfully written. Great job : ]

As i said before, your poems are a lesson, a lesson for poetry learners to take your path to be a successful poet like you. you are a great teacher who have gave alot to P&Q.

this was another great poem by you dear.

Is Philip a special guy? hihi Well you really have a excellent vocab. Choice of words was superb..

Hope and Love filling the vibrant breeze.
^^ I really love that line.. It was really beautiful.

5/5! as always.

Beautifully written love poem, emotions are well expressed.
My favorite lines are:
-Hope and Love filling the vibrant breeze.
In lucid resonance did I pause to breathe;-
This poem is simple, but great.
5/5

Absolutley wonderful, as usual lol. I love acrostic poems. They seem easy, but it's a lot harder to keep a nice flow with it's structure, without losing the depth of the piece. Anyway, you do it ever so gracefully. 5/5

marcella