Nice work, really heartfelt - not much to fault really apart from some of the rhyming seems very forced and sometimes its better not to rhyme. Also some spellings are wrong such as to should be too - otherwise its great work and i look forward to reading more from you.

Dean =)

Now i call this the best, beside the best quality of the poem, it is also the greatest meaning. look how you are realizing that you might hurt someone s feelings and look at others how they break your heart without turning around to see what they did to you. this shows what kind of person are you... I wish i had some friends like you then i wouldnt be worried at all about the pain if being part of this life.
great job and truly you deserve a 5/5

Really sweet...i liked it

Hey yea it was great cuz but ur still a.........great writer and a dork lol just kidding 5/5