Oh the repeating in this poem really defined the emotion and the effect it had was amazing!

5/5 David

Very good, the repeating made it sound wonderfully...The flow is awesome and the choice of words is simple and powerful...

*isabel*

The repeation really drew me in and kept my attention. I really loved this. again the flow was great, and the emtion was strong. The word choice was simple, yet so strong. well penned, and wonderfully written. 5/5

Very beutiful poem....the repetition added to the depth n surely inscreased the intensity of the emotions which r well expressed through out...Beutiful work!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I like how all of your poems have a main theme but i think that you should go out side you comfort zone if only once. even if you suck i found that trying something just a little of of our daily rutine will just make the wrold all the better. fabulouse job any way:~)Sam