I like this poem. It spoke to me a lot because I have been feeling weird about all the change going on around me. It has a good flow to it. I must say,though; This is the first poem I've read that doesn't have any punctuation. That's alright, though. Sometimes it can be distracting because that's what some readers look for is how many mistakes you make. But, because you didn't have any of it the meaning shone through. Nicely penned.

Alesia