by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Apr 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
He takes the knife and she takes the gun |
by Spirit
This is going to be one of my faves i love it great job |
by Veamm
Excellent! |
I liked that alot. it told a story that i couldnt stop reading. it flowed well, cept the usual minr errors we both have. and i like the concept of them assuming no one cared, and then finding out how wrong they are. very good. |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, this should probably a sad poem, but it was still good, nice lines and nice flow. Keep it up. |