Comments : A Lesson To Be Learned

  • 17 years ago

    by malina

    I sometimes feel like this...really good..hope to read more

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    Wow..this was really diffrent and very nice!
    youv gotta alot of talent w/ ur words!!
    5.5

    jeneio

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Its sweet, and although a lot of people feel this way, you rarely see a good poem about the subject. Good job =]

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Aw...cute, yet sad. I read that in math once....and it still sounds just as great now as it did then. Great poem, it flowed perfectly and the message was cute...great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    I know what you feel, I've felt like that too.
    It's a beautiful, sad poem, with a nice flow and the right words.
    I realy enjoyed reading it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow. That was nice. It was sad, and beautiful, It was a great piece of work. I enjoyed it. You put a lot of emotion into it, and it was very good

  • 16 years ago

    by dirtyhands

    Ahmmm,isnt it a kind of cheating? lol
    nice work!
    keep writing pal
    hope to read more from yah,
    4/5