by MaSkEdSoUl Apr 15, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
She's beautiful |
Wow the ending of this really caught me by suprise for some reason. I liked it, very sweet, its easy to tell that you and your mother have a very close and tight bond. The only thing that I have to say is if you made this poem a bit longer and went into more descriptions of why she is that way it would be a bit better. But I still really liked it. |
Aww thats such a sweet poem! i hope she got to read it. well done hun. |
by amoxi
This poem was good moms are the greatest people ever very nice job |
by shawn
I liked it alot, but i do agree that this poem would be to pair with you others if it was a bit longer. But i still think it deserves a 5/5, well done! |
OH YEAH SAY IT NICE AND Proud this poem rules i love it 5/5 for sure. |