Comments : An Instant

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Wow...this is such a fantastic poem...
    i love the message in it...
    i especially love the part:
    "Not quite a woman
    nor yet a child
    with plans unstable
    and dreams gone wild"

    but the whole poem is just great
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Wow, that was so beautifully written. I can relate to is so well. I really love how you described it all....and the last line, thats my favorite! Keep it up!

    ~Morgan~