Wow...this is such a fantastic poem...
i love the message in it...
i especially love the part:
"Not quite a woman
nor yet a child
with plans unstable
and dreams gone wild"
but the whole poem is just great
5/5
keep going
*isabel*
Wow, that was so beautifully written. I can relate to is so well. I really love how you described it all....and the last line, thats my favorite! Keep it up!