by ~*SugarCube*~ Apr 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You take me by the hand and guide me through the night. |
This poem is really cute. i like it alot. it remind me of me and my boyfriend =) good job |
by Tricky Daze
It was a good story and the flow keep going..i loved that especially the wording...keep it up |
by Startle Me
This seems more like a story |
by tyanna
The flow at the end didnt' seem to go with the rest of the poem but I really liked it..It is hard to get a poem to say what you want yet at the same time get it to flow with what you've got...Great job though..very touching and sweet..5/5 |
by Kristina
Aww this is a really good poem. i really like it a lot. i think you did a great job on it! 5/5 |