Thank you

by ~*SugarCube*~   Apr 15, 2007


You take me by the hand and guide me through the night.
You tell me you love me, and every thing is alright.
You're the only one that seems to care about me.
You see something in me, that no one else can see.

To everyone else I'm a huge mistake, they wish I was never born.
Always making me feel horrible leaving me alone to mourn.
Then you came into my life, I was scared to give you my heart.
But you were always there for me, I didn't want us to be apart.

You found your way into my heart, it wasn't easy to give.
Now that I did I don't regret it, I want to be with you as long as I live.
You opened up my eyes, you made everything better than before.
Because of you I don't let the things everyone say get to me anymore.

Thank you for everything you've done
without you I wouldn't be complete.
Throughout the years you've made me feel loved
you've always been so sweet.
I know you won't hurt me, you won't leave my side.
I love you with all my heart, and one day hope to be your bride.

*Chelsea*

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  • 17 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    This poem is really cute. i like it alot. it remind me of me and my boyfriend =) good job

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was a good story and the flow keep going..i loved that especially the wording...keep it up
    Well done
    Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    This seems more like a story
    And less of a poem.
    Advise:
    Try not to use so much pronouns.
    For example:
    You take me by the hand and guide me through the night.
    You can turn that into

    Takes me by the hand
    Guide me through the night.
    Or something like that.

  • 17 years ago

    by tyanna

    The flow at the end didnt' seem to go with the rest of the poem but I really liked it..It is hard to get a poem to say what you want yet at the same time get it to flow with what you've got...Great job though..very touching and sweet..5/5
    Tyanna

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww this is a really good poem. i really like it a lot. i think you did a great job on it! 5/5

    ~Kristina