This poem of yours had a great sense to it, and when reading it, I got really into it, which I always love with poems. Your choice of words was fantastic and the rhyming seemed as though it was easy for you. that is a gift. To some people, rhyming is hard, but you have it captured. I also liked how you made this poem an acrostic. I think it is hard to make this style work and have it work really good. You have now excelled it! Great job!

Bravo! Once again wonderful!
You have a great talent with acrostics!
Keep up the wonderful writing!
God Bless 5/5
<3Tayy

Hm...It was really interesting, well written and overall a great read.
Beautiful!

xox

Very interesting piece. You must be good with acrostic poems, I've always wanted to do one but they turned out weird lol. Anyways this poem was excellent. Great wording and vocab. Keep writing! 5/5

"Oh, how horrible you are to me, dear Fate!
Never to realize this ludicrous love... too late..."

Wow.. very intense sweets. I think it's true how fate will lead us to whatever is planned, no matter how much we try to resist.
And it seems so unfair at times..
Beautifully written acrostic
5/5
*Gem*

Amazing words the very last line was my favorite so powerful and refreshing as well as sincear and beautiful nice work.

*stands and claps, again the was brillant. Perfect penned Acrostic poem. again short, but powerful. I loved it. excellent job once more. please keep writting, it would be a loos that i could not stand, if I could not read your written words, keep up the great work.

Another beautiful acrostic..lol...u handle this art so well...short yet soo cute n meaningful....it sure comes deep from within u..kp writing!
5/5!
xxPoojaxx

I've noticed you have several acrostic poems intitled GIDSON, but every one is different and very unique. Again amazing vocab and great flow. Excellent job 5/5

I like acrostic style I think it would be very hard for me to write something like that. good job. :)

Well... lol. i'm sorry, but i didn;t really understand your poem all that well, but the flow and vocabulary were esquisite, so it was still really pleasing to read.
i also liked your use of metaphors in this poem, very well done. 5/5
gabriella

Wow. great poem i loved it. keep it up!! 5/5

`-jackie.

This was truely so sweet and amazing, touched my heart and soul with such beauty and love you portrayed in this Acrostic poem. I can tell how much you care for Gidson through this. The emotion of love was really cute and sweet. I think you did a great job with this hunnie. Well done debbers. ~mel

"Gale was Wind when you first came,
Intruding with force the emptiness within;"

Again, a poetic success. I cannot say more than simply compliment your ability to combine words and the emotion build up your work beholds. Excellent. Very well done :).