Is All She Sees

I thought you did a good job with this. I liked the first two stanzas more than the second two. The hwole thing had a nice flow. I think my favorite stanza was the first one becuase of the rhyme, which I rather liked. I've noticed that you always include a story in your pieces, I like that, and you do it well.

Brad

I WILL NOT ONLY RATE IT BUT I'LL COMMENT AS WELL, THIS WAS GOOD I THINK YOU NAILED IT FOR ME, I DONT EVEN LIKE LOVE STORIES, BUT YOU ALWAYS DO A WONDERFUL JOB AND I HAVE 1 OF UR POEMS AS MY FAVS, ITS THE ONE CALLED "STOP" I LOVED THAT 1.. =]

I like it! It's a good poem. Written well with truth behind it. Sometimes after you've been hurt, it takes awhile to trust again. Sometimes you just need someone to show you it's okay. Awesome poem. I love it! :D

Thanks for the comments! You rock!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Very powerful and states how i feel :P 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

Omg i love this one! u totally dont suck at love poems, quite the opposite in fact. i love the flow and u worded it brilliantly! great poem, u shuld rite more love poems 5/5
xx