Lexie, wow, I must say I am very impressed with this poem. I've read a few of your stuff in the past, but this is the best one I have read. I really liked the emotion in this poem, it was so powerful, so raw, so real! I could feel it!.. I loved the last verse, it summed up everything very nicely. Fantastic job on this one.

This is an amazing poem. You did a great job in writing it. I love the emotion in this poem. keep up the good work!! 5/5

~Chelsea

Such raw emotions were beautifully expressed through this piece. I was rather enchanted by reading it, and I'm glad that it flowed fluidly and that none of the lines seem unnatural. Overall, 'twas a good write. Well done upon writing such a poignant piece. all the best and take care.
Marian =]

Oh wow this wonderful. I can sense the emotion and the hate, if I might add. Very well done, great flow and very sad. Keep writing!! 5/5

Wow, you really conveyed your emotions through this piece, it was raw, and very expressive. I think emotion is real important to have in writing, and you difanlty capture that. It also flowed well, fluent, and it was easy for me to read, and understand aswell.
welldone love.
its great.
kaitlynx.

Excellent poem, the last stanza was very good and it was well organized. Well penned and 5/5 keep up the good work Lexie.