Comments : Opposites Attract

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Sir, again a WOW poem with a really deep and touching meaning. i love each word of it, yet my favorite part is
    The point that a philosopher has dreamed of
    While the hated silently searched for love

    great job once again and it is a preasure of reading your poem again.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again wonderfully written. I am at aloss of words You are talented. Keep up the good work 5/5. I am adding you to my favorites

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Eck.
    Once again.
    To me, you're a poet God.
    This is effing pewfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I love how flawlessly your poems flow. It's wonderful. Everything rhyme is practically spot on, too.

    "Good and evil are hopelessly bound to meet
    To Taste together the bitter and the sweet
    The tongue that uttered the worthless lie
    Was never born to the lowly earth to die"

    ^ This stanza was my favourite, especially the first two lines. I like the sinister atmosphere it creates.

    Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    I was a fan of this, the 3rd lines of the 1st 3rd and 4th spoke to me the most. good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    All i can say is wow to this poem. Your very talented and i find you to be an amazing poet. Your vocab so strong and portrayed beautifully.
    I'm truely shocked. Best poem i've read all week no word of a lie. Well done with this 5/5 definitly! Well done~mel