This poem is very well written. i liked it a ton. i think it was sadm but beautiful. wonderful job on it! 5/5

~Kristina

Great job. lots of girls can relate to this. i once used to feel this way, and this poem gave me back the memories of my days in heaven... it had so much feeling and it was very well written. 5/5 keeo up the good work.

This was amazing.. I really liked how you created the stanzas very different. The poem its self was very sad but very nicely penned. nice job, keep it up.