Comments : Uncovered Thoughts

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    I really like this, thoughts are the best kept secrets we have. i enjoyed this read, and the last stanza does it for me. (: [x]

    -Tom

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is really good. i really like it a lot. the flow was wonderful. you did such a great job writing it. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    "Thoughts are such sacred thing" it should say thoughts are such a sacred thing, or thoughts, such a secret thing. Very interesting poem.. I think that the last line summed up the entire thing perfectly. Such a creative idea nice work.