by Debbie Apr 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I see my fated stars within his eyes, |
Very good, I enjoyed this wonderful piece. Very well done :) |
by Mr M
Very good...I have such a problem writing in this form but you have it down perfectly. Great job. |
WOW that was and excellent poem ,wording was great I loved it m great job , it's all new to me but man it was good , thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy d 5/5 |
Wonderful piece, greatly written. It holds so much beauty within the lines. |
This poem is certainly unique and very few could have written it this well I'm sure. I have a hard time attempting to write these poems because I know if one line is off, the whole poem is as well. But you were perfect in everyway and I love the way you make even the hardest of formats look so easy. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23 |