Excellent poem thanks for your comment on my poem "Torment" u r correct on what it is about it is also about my battle with dhs. yes I am a single mother

Oh wow very beautiful I loved it!! Great wording and the flow was excellent. Keep it up! 5/5

Debbie
How empressive your poerty is... Very beautiful :)

Take Care Cindy

Debbie
How empressive your poerty is... Very beautiful :)

Take Care Cindy

Ah.. i rememeber my attempt at this format...
*Shakes head in despair*
But this!
This is beautifully set out.
The wording and the emotion and the rhythm is amazing.
You've really mastered this style with flair.
5/5
*Gem*

Excellent job. such powerful lines. I loved each and every single beat of this poem. Nice job, very interguing write.

Excellent job. such powerful lines. I loved each and every single beat of this poem. Nice job, very interguing write.

I don't think I could have written a poem, of this format. The word choice, and everything is perfect. You did an excellent job. Keep up the good work 5/5

This is a very unique and wonderful poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem "The Simple Things You Do"..it's very much appreciated! You are pretty young for such an amazing talent; You should get your poems published if you haven't looked into it already.

~MuCh LoVe

A wonderful, incredible, powerful poem. Difficult poetry style to master, but it seems as if you have mastered it. Your vocabulary is amazing, and your poem seems to flow quite well. I enjoyed this, and the more I read, the more I enjoyed it. I think this shall go on my fav's.

Wonderfully written. Keep writing =]

5/5
~Stephen White

Very, very nice! so beautiful! good work!
God Bless

Superb dear. Beautiful lines
Awsome rhymes
Its worth five
So I give five
Its flows so well
Mistakes are nil

Nicley written

Hey,
wow beautiful, its very unique and i like your writting style, the flow is good as well as the rhyming, excellent work dear, You're have an amazing talent!
kisses stephanie

Very well done
5/5
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This poem is certainly unique and very few could have written it this well I'm sure. I have a hard time attempting to write these poems because I know if one line is off, the whole poem is as well. But you were perfect in everyway and I love the way you make even the hardest of formats look so easy. Amazing job as always 5/5 GG23

Wonderful piece, greatly written. It holds so much beauty within the lines.
My favorite stanza is:
-Those mystic pools fail to reflect deceit-
He held me captive in his earnest glance,
Making my young heart skip a thousand beats.-

Great job, keep up! 5/5

WOW that was and excellent poem ,wording was great I loved it m great job , it's all new to me but man it was good , thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy d 5/5

Very good...I have such a problem writing in this form but you have it down perfectly. Great job.

Very good, I enjoyed this wonderful piece. Very well done :)