I am sorry about your mom and all. i guess i should be lucky to have on righ? well me and ma mom dont get along very well i ran away from her house for 6 months i have been back for 5 and now i am 3 weeks pregnant. ha. well you need to ttalk i am here. i know how your feeling i have lost ma two best friends to death and it hurts and i know that you are in alot of pain jus know i am here if you wanna e-mail here is ma e-mail superwoman015@msn.com or you can find me on myspace.com/joshieismylove. other wise i am 17 and i have been through alot so ask anything and il give you the best answer jus remember no one can take her place.

The last comment says "sorry about you mom"...I thought it was your dad...???
Anyways..I thought it was very well written (but punctation always makes a poem better). The flow was great and it was full of emotion.. Wonderfully written..
And if this poem is about your life.. I am sorry you had to go through this.. I too have been through a lot..(Neither parents died.. they are just addicts that found beer and drugs more important than their kids.. Life seems to never get easier but writting helps to release your feelings... Great job hun..
~Tyanna~ BTW 5/5

This one nearly made me cry too.
If its true, I'm sorry for your lose.
The poem flowed well and the emotion was deep.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Another Excellent Piece! 5/5 I can relate to this one as well. I have a father who has a serious drinkin problem and i worry about him as well. Hope everythings ok. keep your chin up im here to talk if youd like.