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by isabel   Apr 16, 2007


After that dreadful day, nothing was the same
You hit me and hit me, 'till I fell into the ground
Laughed 'till I cried, only had myself to blame
Always looking back, never making a sound

He's the popular guy, like him there is no one
He hates the "outsider", he's always making her mad
Though his mother is nice, she never knew her son
He was probably born in hell, to make that girl so sad

I am always afraid, I'm hidden forever
I am not safe, neither my best friend
He finds me always, he is a sadist, but clever
We're mistreated together, together 'till the end

From second to fourth grade, it was pretty much the same
A sad feeling remained, for all eternity
The girl always fought, cried and felt pain
The feeling is always hidden, but always in her memory

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I like the vocab and the word choice in this poem, the were exceptionally well placed. the emtion was flawless. I really liked this. 5/5 once more

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    Do you know what a sadist is? xD
    this poem is about the time between 2nd and 4th grade, i knew you in the 5th...

  • 17 years ago

    by Luis Sousa

    Am i your sadist friend?! :)

    well, very well written...

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