by I Seem to be the Heartless Apr 16, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I am... |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Short and simple, I like it. The flow of it was good, good use of words. Umm In my opinion, I think you should take off the word 'inside' on the 7nth line, I think it'd sound better. But overall it was really good! Keep it up! |