What I am

by I Seem to be the Heartless   Apr 16, 2007


I am...
...oh so lonely
...highly depressed
...pulling my hair out
...completely stressed
...tormented by demons
who tear me apart
...so tired
from all the tears I've cried

05 March 2007

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  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Short and simple, I like it. The flow of it was good, good use of words. Umm In my opinion, I think you should take off the word 'inside' on the 7nth line, I think it'd sound better. But overall it was really good! Keep it up!