Umm.. About the 8th line down you mispelled hear, with her.
"up and eyes" up my eyes*
The poem was great, I think that stanzas would have better fit this poem, but it was still great. :]

Keep up the great work.
<3

and, once again.. if it's true
i'm sorry. it seemed as if it were, just as the other one did.

That was an amazing poem, I'm soo sorry if that is a true poem :( Its so amazing though! Keep up the GREAT work!!! :D

This was a good poem . sorry if this is true .

keep up the good work .

This is an excellent poem sis but relax she don't hate she will come home soon. keep up the great work sis