Hey,
i'm usely not very fond of nature poems, but this one is great..the rhyming is done great and it flows nicely 5/5
kisses stephanie

Good poem.. I liked it. Good imagery.

I really liked this poem..Kind of soothing! Great wording, flow was flawless, and very well worded...great job hun!!
~TYANNA~

Wow really nice flow and beat i like this poem alot = ] 5/5

I liked how you brought the poem in a whole circle and repeated the first stanza as the last.
It was a nice nature poem. The language was good too, but I thought it was more telling than showing in places.
I'm personally not a fan of rhyme...so I'll leave that aspect out of this :) I just think perfect rhyme and meter are hard to master....

Anyway a good write thanks for sharing.

Beautiful.. Im not usually a big fan of nature poems but it was the title that drew me to this one. The images taht you created with your words were breathtaking. The only critique that I have is that I didnt really understand the last two lines of the poem. but well done overall.

I liked how you repeated the first stanza and used it as the last, people usually cant pull off nature poems well but you did so. liked the title it caught my eye. Flowed nicely. Well done~mel

You should probably use more periods, and less of the dots "... "They're good when you're trying to give suspense through out poems, but this poem really didn't need much suspense. Your rhyming seemed a tad bit forced. Barely, but a little bit.

You did a great job, overall. I thought it was a good poem. I loved how you asked questions. Poetry with questions always seems to grab the readers attention more. It was a great poem, as I already stated and it was cute. :D
4/5

Now imagine the stars, so radiant and true..
in the sky that is so big and blue..
Sitting there staring without a single care.
The weather so beautiful, stary and fair.

I like that part the most. Well written. Excellent flow. 5/5

Wow...this is an awesome poem..I especially like how you contradicted yourself
'Now imagine the stars, so radiant and true..
in the sky that is so big and blue..
Sitting there staring without a single care.
The weather so beautiful, stary and fair.'

The comparison with the stars and the blue sky, very good. 5/5 -Unattractive1

Oh my such a wonderful poem! great imagery created in this poem! I like it! well done! another awesome poem from you! you're really talented! 5/5!