Nice one.
Rhymed really well.
Keep it up!
Rebecca =]

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

Great poem =) You're getting a 5/5!

Enjoyed reading this poem. it had a really good flow, was quite short but got the message out loud and clear :)

was an enjoyable read x

This is really good! i love the emotion put into this poem! Great job