Ok, so i have to say that was absolutly amazing, i love the way it is put together and especially the word usage, you somehow made it all fit together so perfectly. 10/5

This was a great poem, great wording good vocab. It flowed really well!! 5/5

Wow. I am not sure there are other words to describe the way you wrote this poem! The descriptivness was completely facinating, and you went so in depth that I had to read on. My eyes never left the screen, and I read over and over those words of life.

The poem facinated me till the end! Great job!

"A piece of miniature
artwork in which Radiance
lingers forever."

Excellent part.
The way you write is so smooth and fluid.
It's really amazing, it's a type of writing i have yet to master.
teach me dammit! lmao
Seriously, wonderful piece
5/5
*Gem*

That was a different poem than I'm used to reading. Very well crafted.
Keep it up.

Oh, to be honest, I was not expecting this. you advertised this poem in such a negative light, when you should be so proud of a such astounding work. really beautiful and deep and great word choices, impressive to say the least.

Great poem.
The flow was great and your choices were good.
You are a talented writer.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Excellent peice of wrk!!......great loved it!...
Beautifully penned!...perfecto1...hats off to u!
sure 5/5!...

Wow.. so i absolutely LOVE the last line to this poem.. its so simple and strong and the same time.. the vibe this poem gives off is also really strong.. the wording is fantastic and villed with clear images .. another excellent write :D

Wow i couldnt take my eyes off the whole time. it was just so pretty and just it flowed so smoothly. it painted this picture in my imagination. BEAUTIFUL!

I have been reading all your poems, and i am in awe! i love your poetry, every single poem is utterly amazing. i particulary liked this one, your use of words is just so elegant yet creates a really hard hitting point which is such a skill.

these lines struck me
"A piece of miniature
artwork in which Radiance
lingers forever."

just amazing!added you to my favs!

Cute...well actually beautful! The description was amazing, and the flow and the way it rolled off my tongue was perfect! I love it! Keep it up!

Heeeeeeeelloooo You ^^,

Nice poem =) Nice flow and your choice of words is so good! =)

xxx Lots of love<3

This was a damn good poem. the way you used the words and the free form style was amazing. it flowed from sentence into sentence perfectly. i also liked the depth of it. how you used the doll as a mirror of perfection to compare humanity to.
Great work
Love is the law
Love under will
Rocky

Great poem i love the way it is set up it makes it way cooler lol good flow also and thanks for the comment

keenan

Wow, this was great!
the flow was wonderful, and your word choice was amazing!
this is the kind of poem that makes me jealous, great job! 5/5

That is awesome in an almost sick and twisted way. Very good. Nice flow.

I love the darkness this is a fine piece of work

I think 'illumined' should be illuminate?
I thought this write was excellent, especially how you ended it so sweetly. I really liked the language you've used and the overall feeling of the poem because it has depth and sounds sincere - really excellent piece well done :)

This is an interesting one.. The whole time I was thinking it was about a person. But is it? In the end you say the subject is a doll. But the whole thing seems so much more complex than that! Amazing, darling!
Best wishes!