This piece is amazing. The fllow is so perfect I feel so small to comment. Its great 5/5

Wow this is so so deep...your...wow...anyways nicce!5/5

The vocabulary in your poems is really the most amazing that i've read here, your details are so magnifecent that they really make your poems a picture, as i read this, i can see and hear it in my mind.
wow.
5/5
gabriella

It was so chilling just like every nature poem should be..Putting less words as lines were so succesful
My fave lines should be;

I listened in placid glee
with pensive thoughts

Good job
Take care
From Tricky Laura

This is a great poem, but the rhyme scheme in the 1st verse was a little off - regardless, the atmosphere you painted was wonderful :)
Please comment on Falling Off Cloud Nine, True, and any poem that has few quotes. I enjoyed reading your poetry!
~claire

"Yet lying on green
pastures,
I listened in placid glee
with pensive thoughts
resonating
toward nature's
unspoken melody."

This stanza made the poem. The imagery is amazing. I love the vocabulary you used, and more, how you used it.

5/5.

Debbie, again, lovely vocab, a beautiful, powerful write, with awesome imagery
xxxxx

Beautiful poem about nature.
You used the right words and it was a pleasure to read.
Fantastic poem!

Enchanting. You capture your theme with a mystic detail that make it wholly effervescent.

Honestly, this is the second nature poem I've read *and* enjoyed on this site.

Vibrant rapture and resonant were some me the well chosen words i liked to imagine with it keep it up 5 for it

WOW that was a very beautiful poem and was wonderfully written , you always write beautiful poems and always a pleasure to read , a remarkable job perfectly written with much care and deep inner feelings , keep up the great work my friend,,,, your friend ,Tracy d 5/5

Great poem again!!!!!!! wow i love your poems they have such great wordings and power mann good job and thx for the comment also lol:):)

keenan

Nicely done. I liked the ending, and the flow was flawless. You're a gorgeous writer.

I just wanted to say how you seem to use old English in your writing; it's a beautiful thing and you use it so well. Congradulations on that.

And I love your writings. They're amazing; they leave me where I can't say anything in my comment, and you have no idea how rare that is.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Excellent.....
wow.......great appreciation for your pretty good expressions.... well done and I really love the style of writings.... 5/5

Nazeer

Marian, I like the way you penned it. You obviously have an outstanding talent for writing. this is great :)

Marjan x