I remember the 'man eater' lol and very well said, sadly i can relate to this but on a different level :( the flow is just perfect as always and as always i give it 99/5 :)

"Have can you be so blind?" (six) (I think How should replace Have in this line.)

"I don't know what to do" - This line obviously shows how this distressing "thing" is infuriating you. It must be really hard since she's a friend of the two of you.

"Honey, you know I trust you fully
Cos I love you with all my heart
But please just make her go away
Before she tears us apart"
Now this one clearly expresses your pain, worry, resentment and etc., I didn't know about this "man eater" but she does seem to be dangerous... hm.
As always, a joy to read. Thank you for sharing! Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

(sic), I mean, not (six). lmaoo
My apologies for posting twice :)

And there are girls like that everywhere! the boys are just never able to see...

~~Rikki, aka SSS~~

Gem
This is a thing that happens all the time. Some people just do not see things that others see.

Everyone else has noticed
How can you be the only one
Who can't see what she's up to
Or has she already won

This really sums it all up.
Take Care Love Cindy

Aww bless ya this poem u have written reminds me of my m8's tellin me bout stacey one of ma m8's well sort of ma m8 cos she's well nice 2 me wen it's just ,me n her but wen she's wid her othe rm8's who i dont like cos they think there hard they take the piss out of me stacey laughs n joins in wid them shaLL I stay friends with stacey or not please tell me

Oh, why are men so blind to the obvious at times. I'll have to go back and read about the man eater.

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Very nice =D