by Dr of Bishonomics Apr 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I think it's going,I think it's gone, |
by Woe
Oooh... i think i feel a little like that... except the d.ick part... lol. |
The structure's a bit ragged, but this is a GOOD poem. Its point gets brought right out, and there's no mistaking your depth of feeling. It had me nodding agreement at the end, reminiscent of words of my own, both written and said. Well done. |