Comments : A poem inside a poem

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow, very powerful and I know how you feel. I feel like this all the time. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here! Great poem!!

    ~Megan~

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    I think this is my favorite of yours I've read apart from broken. I wrote one that had the same kind of feel as this once, i think thats why i like it so much. I esspecialy like the first four lines of this one. Great introduction, loved it. Your a very good writer. I enjoyed this one alot

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    This is my favorite! i love it! u never lost ur flow and kept going with it! its amazing!! <3ed it!
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    a good poem, i love the flow and the subject =) nice work 5/5
    kisses stephanie