Prom night

How sad. but beautifully written. the flow was a bit off but i understood it. great job. and im sorry if this really did happen. no one deserves that.

Beautiful sad penned.... though simply but you express them with beautiful emotions.... keep your head up high, there still have tomorrow.... "Don't give up when you still have something to give. Nothing is really over until the moment you stop trying. Don't shut love out of your life by saying it's impossible to find. The quickest way to receive love is to give love. The fastest way to lose love is to hold it too tightly; and the best way to keep love is to give it wings." take care. Bert.

This poem was quite sad, Love gone wrong. I think you write better depressing poems honestly. This was good but not upto the standards of your other works. Emotion was good none the less not as powerful as in other pieces I have read from you though and the flow was spot on as always. Well done a good effort. ~mel

A very sad love poem, really made me feel for the person in it.. I hope it isnt true, or about you, cause that would make me sad. I like the way you write, Some of the lines seemed a bit forced to me, but you do seem to have a tallent for making the reader feel the emotions you'retrying to express. At least from what i've read.
thanks for sharing =)

Hey,
i hope it didn't happened for real.. what a stupid guy then, he doesn't deserve you!
anyway nice poem, great flow 5/5
kisses stephanie