Wow! very sad! Good, but sad! I like your writing. Keep it up! Also is Imagen suppose to be Imagine!?

Wow, I'm at a loss of words. That is the best poem I have EVER read. I loved it. It brought tears to my eyes. I could feel the pain dripping from the poem. Keep writing!!

~Megan~

Detailed, didnt leave anything out to leave the reader confused. I loved how feelings from the paper jumped right to the reader while reading this. I definetly felt her pain. great jog <3

I LOVE this poem!!! i can really relate cuz i feel the same way your really good at writing and from what i can tell from reading your poems your improving with every one!! keep writing much love~! <3 nicole

p.s.. check out my poems if u get the chance thanx

Good poem. i gave it a 4/5 because i personally like poems that rhyme better. but it was still a great poem .keep up the good work!

I LOVE THIS POEM!!! I CAN RELATE TO IT IN SO MANY WAYS...LATELY THATS HOW I FEEL...I HOPE TO READ MORE LIKE THIS!!

I really liked this poem...maybe the best i've read so far

So sad. Written wonderfully.

Well, it wasn't what I had expected. It was better than what I expected. I did notice, each second line wasn't capitalized..which usually bugs me, but not all poets do it. And there were a few lines that were longer than the rest, when if you switched a few words around or took it down to the next line, it would look a lot neater as well.

You did, however, do a great job in displaying the emotion of this poem without making it too typically a cutting poem. It had great imagery, and I really liked the line "when she saw a stray tear line from her daughters eye." That line truly took my breath away, it captivated me and I really liked it. It made the feel of the poem more intense knowing that the daughter had just died moments ago..with tears in her eyes and misery in her heart.

Also, this poem sends a significant message. How even the happiest person that you know may be super depressed. Which, more people need to realize. Great job though, overall, I really enjoyed reading this. =)

5.5

This poem is excellent! i love it, theres so much emotion in it 5/5.. thank you for commentin muh poem 2..
xx

Wow, this is really a sad depressing poem, but it's really good!!! ~Sam~

Ah yes this is a great poem. i agree that this is an excellent poem. i loved the description the most.

5/5 David

Oh my god!
This wasn't something I was expecting at all, I had just fell in love with your poem. I understand every single fiber of the poem.

Good job!
Please continue to write such beautiful works.

Im totally lost for words. its so sad it kind of gives me the shivers :S

but a good poems all round

Wow, that was a great poem! it connected with me more than anything in the world. great job!

Wow and you said im good i love your writing. This poem embodied me is all i can really say and this line hit me hard for some reason:

But worst of all on the floor,
layed the girl who wasn't anything anymore.

Eh anyway ill have to read some more of ur poems soon im in a bit of a rush but i wanted to comment back anyway and im really glad i took the time to read this.

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I love this poem
it was so sad but still good
keep up the good work

Wow this is a very good poem i cant wait to read the rest of yours
_forever carly_

Wow that was a truly sad poem 5/5 very descriptive and unique

Wow! So much pain.. good work