Wow. that was...~amazing~.
rrly it was. it makes you think about all the people who just dont understand you. and think you so happy but rrly your bleeding inside. <333

Amazingly written, filled with emotions and so touching. The imagery that you created through the whole poem is great, you described everything excellently. 5/5 from me

Wow i almost cried good job 5/5

Oh my god. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I loved it. It's so emotional, I hope this has nothing to do with you. Because if it does I will hunt you down and beat the living crap out of you :) But I love this poem, it's written so well. Keep up the amazing work Rikku. I love it <3333

Wow this is so good. you are like one of the greatest poets well done :) 5/5

Wow.. that was really emotional. The title caught my eye when I was about to leave your page and I just HAD to read it. lol. I'm really glad I did. You're a really good writer!!

Keep writing!!
Cayce

Wow. 5/5! gave me goosebumps (: i like it (:
xxx.

Wow! that poem truly touched me! great work!
5/5

I definately wanted to cry. i had a friend sommit suicide, and an uncle so this poem hit me hard. great job 5/5

Amazing poem....can't wait for more like this one

Dude this poem is so fricken amazing, i am just like wow, the line

"But worst of all on the floor,
Laid the girl who wasn't anything anymore."

really really caught my attention, all I can say is wow, it's really really sad but also a great message to let people know of the sadness that some people have to go through.

HIGH FIVE!!! 5/5

F in hell
that was awesome
WOW i love it
added to my favs
it took my breath away
brilliant and u should b proud
xx

5/5!!!

That's profound...
i love it
thank you

This poem here was absolutely amazing and I loved it. I felt it showed such great emotion and it left me speechless. It was such a sad, yet realistic story. I've seen something similar actually happen and it really is heart breaking. The way you captured everything into this poem.. It was simply phenomenal. This is, in my opinion, well done and brilliantly written. Good Job Kayla. xD
5/5

Oh wow.

genius..

You did amazing, Sis. This poem is one of the first in ages that has ever made me feel sorrow just by reading it. You made every stanza flow perfectly, and I loved how at the end you added the bit about the girl's tear line and single dot on the lonesome suicide note. It was very sad, but that is a good thing. You portrayed this emotion exactly as it should have been and it came across very clear. Your words were well chosen to set the tone, and I don't think anyone could have done a better job. I gave you a 5/5. Very, very well done Sis!

What a way to express the pain held inside. Normally, people cant understand until its too late.

You should (if you want) check out some of my groups poems.

Keep up the good work.

5/5

Dang girl.
this is... wow.
I love it. [:
I love you!!!
:D.
<3

You are very talented. This grabs readers and forces them to see the pain that people all around us spend so much time trying to hide. Keep uyp the amazing work 5/5 <3

This was deep and really hit home for me.

5*