As is always off your poems, great work
Keep it up
Nathan

Wow!
I loved it!
u were right!...the whole setting of the poem is great! and by mentioning the boy lost made it more sad...but ur a great writer! keep it up!

True to your words, I indeed find this poem magnificient... Beautifully expressed emotions and the subject of this poem is creative in it's own way...

P.s: thanx for the return of your comment. may I recommend you one of my poem "alone(I'm so lonely)