This is so beautifully written, and so true! the way u express the love and warmth u feel from god is so touching and i can truely relate to it! a lovely poem! keep it up! xXx

In certain aspects i can relate to this and i think you wrote it with such love and care.
It shines through the words and touches the reader..
Nicely written
5/5
*Gem*

This is a veryy good poem way better than minee but we hav the same message to get out and thats all that matters but this is veryy good you very talentedd =]