4/5 .. it was good. i gave it a 4 because i honestly like some more flow and rhyme to it. other then that is was excellent. i was able to feel what you were getting at and had a more clear storyline to it. good job. keep writting. :) |
by Poetvoices
I can tell this poem was a great release for you, though there was nothing special about it for me. I gave it a 4, but I think, now, it deserves a 3. Believe me, I know exactly how you're feeling. Friends being gone sucks. |
by Vanessa
It was a good read. A feeling that most people can relate to, having lost a friend at one time or another. Very nicely written, well pinned , and a good flow 5/5 |
by Melpomene
I liked this poem alot im sure alot of people can relate to it. Although for a poem like this it should show stronger emotion i think if you added stronger vocab throughout this it would be alot more emotional and get the reader into it alot more. Good effort though. Well done~mel |
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Love ur poem it beautiful lol rate mine |
by ASPHYXIATED
Your title was catchy. |