Short sweet and to the point. death is always sad. I like this style of poem and I think you did a really good job.4/5

I found this poem to be really beautifully sad. It was short but showed so much emotion in every line of this poem. The style was great and it flowed beautifully. Loved the ryhme you had going on it made the poem seem so much stronger. I dont understand how anyone could vote this poem under a 5. This definitly deserves a 5/5 from me. Well done on an emotionally sad poem. ~mel