Shadow [acrostic]

by Hannah Emellia   Apr 16, 2007


Shifting shapeless creatures envy what they'll never have
Hours passing by like decades waiting for the night
After darkness spreads her blackened wings over the sun
Deathly quiet phantoms leave the shadows just for spite
Otherworldly quickness and a fragile sense of wrong
Wonderers from the darker side of day into the light

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Well done, great acrostic poem. Your wording is incredible and atmosphere that you created its simply powerful. So short but superb poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ChaoticallyMe

    Thanks for reading mine. Here's one right back at you. You've got some dark thoughts in you...well expressed :)

  • 17 years ago

    by x Mo x

    That gave me the chills...the way you described shadows scares me...you used the perfect words to describe a mysterious object. It's awsome! Great Job!

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