I See What No One Else Sees...

by myshiningstar14   Apr 16, 2007


A walk so bold the
Temperature In the
Room builds,
A smile so illuminating,
Time stops.
A body so luscious
It makes my hair stand
On ends,
Makes me go crazy
-and to know I'm your
Lady sends me off a
Cliff-
Because I know baby
This is it
But....

You act like you don't
Know the truth,
You act as if I can't
See what's behind
Your saccharine soul

It's like you pretend
I can't see who you
Really are.
It's like you're
Oblivious to who
You really are.
Well baby I'm here
to Point it out.

Brighter than the moonlight
On the crimson sea,
Your face shines.
Your touch like a parade
On my skin,
Like a party for two
-just you and me-
Come on baby we're
Going to make it through.

Deep caramel eyes
That dance when you
Smile,
That say what can't
Be said with just words.
Purest soul I've ever
Seen,
Do you even know
How much you mean
To me?
Heart and soul.
The final piece that
Keeps me whole.

You act like you don't
Know the truth,
You act as if I can't
See what's behind
Your saccharine soul

It's like you pretend
I can't see who you
Really are.
It's like you're
Oblivious to who
You really are.
Well baby I'm here
to Point it out.

When I look at you
I see an angel.
Your arms as strong
As a brick wall,
The one thing that
Won't let me fall.

Your invisible wings,
Are curled within your
Heart,
You've tucked them away,
That's why its time for me
To say;
Your pride was killed when
The world took one look at
You and gave up on you,
But I'm here for you and
I see what no one else sees.

Your halo trickles high above
Your head,
Its been smashed and broken
But I'm here to mend it.
Your angelic voice stands,
Shouting,
Crying its final tears,
As I wipe them from your face,
Leaving no trace of there
Death

Sexy lips that make me
Scream for more,
That give me everything
I need and more.
I know that's not important,
But I feel the love you
Bring, like the first day of
Spring.
I don't worry if it's
raining outside,
Because in here
with you boy,
its nothing
But sunshine.

Running my hands through
Your hair,
Digging them into your
Skin,
Massaging your scalp,
Looking in your eyes
Completing all of our whys,
-like walking right out of
A dream-
An endless stream of hope,
But as I look in your
Eyes...

You act like you don't
Know the truth,
You act as if I can't
See what's behind
Your saccharine soul

It's like you pretend
I can't see who you
Really are.
It's like you're
Oblivious to who
You really are.
Well baby I'm here
to Point it out.

Your skin soft
Like a velvet rose,
Your beauty finer
Than the finest wine,
-your love like a taste
Of fine wine that runs
Down the amber soul
Of me.-
That's right you'll
always Be mine.

I'm here for you and
I see what no one sees.
An angel,
I feel your elegance,
Your love that could
Only come from someone
Whose tasted,
Whose seen,
Whose been to heaven.

I'm here for you and
I see what no one else sees,
An angel.

** to my baby, i love you so much <333*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Great,great job! this poem had both elegance and spice, from the angelic images to the sexy descriptions of this boy you love, it really shows how you feel about him, i sure hope you let him read all these, there great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Milton

    I dunno how you got to be so good at writing feelings down but you did. heh. really nice poem. good stuff.

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very good. There were a few word choices that you "might" want to reconsider. I'm going to be very picky - Feel free to ignore me ;-)
    "Crimson sea" makes one think more of the sun going down, not the moon shining on the water. And "saccharine" is a fake sweetner - When we say something is saccharine, we mean overly sweet, overly sentimental - but not in a good way.

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Brighter than the moonlight
    On the crimson sea,
    Your face shines.
    Your touch like a parade
    On my skin,
    Like a party for two
    -just you and me-
    Come on baby we're
    Going to make it through.

    Such beautiful words. Very nice.