by myshiningstar14 Apr 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A walk so bold the |
by Weeping Wolf
Great,great job! this poem had both elegance and spice, from the angelic images to the sexy descriptions of this boy you love, it really shows how you feel about him, i sure hope you let him read all these, there great! |
by Milton
I dunno how you got to be so good at writing feelings down but you did. heh. really nice poem. good stuff. |
by Corinne
Very good. There were a few word choices that you "might" want to reconsider. I'm going to be very picky - Feel free to ignore me ;-) |
Brighter than the moonlight |