I'm So In Love With You <333

by myshiningstar14   Apr 16, 2007


Baby take my hand,

close your eyes and

watch our future fall

into place.

Lick your lips,

this is it;

just sit back and

have a taste.

Your touch sends

a poison through

my veins,

it rattles my brain,

makes me go insane.

Your eyes hypnotize me,

they set me free

this is where I always want

to be.

Your heart that beats so

strong and faithful,

touching my soul in ways

I've never known,

touching my world in a

way only you can.

Baby be able to look at

me and know the love

we share,

look and know that

you're all I ever need,

look and know that

you're the only one I'll

ever love like this;

and with just one kiss

I knew we'd last forever,

because baby I'm so In

love with you.

Time presses against

destiny,

making it harder and

harder as the days

move on,

to be without you.

Destiny kisses fate

like they're best-friends,

when really in the

end,

the mistake density

made,

was not letting me

hold you sooner.

Fate caressed inside its own shell,

holds us hand in hand,

tugging on our hearts more and

more,

letting us know its all going

to be okay.

Your presence how it

captives me,

-breathless oh so breathless-

Your everything,

takes me by the hand,

and together we run

hand in hand towards

our future together.

Standing on the edge of my life,

coming to the only thing that

has ever felt right,

I hold on tight.

My heart beats like crazy,

cause baby you amaze me;

just come lay with me and

lets you and I spread our love

across the sky, because I am

so in love with you.

**i love you baby more than anyone or anything ever could, or ever will**

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  • 15 years ago

    by James Nappo

    I love all the personification in the poem; Great use

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Standing on the edge of my life,

    coming to the only thing that

    has ever felt right,

    I hold on tight.
    -fav part

    beautifulllllll poem of love, reminds me of a song i think you'd like called "baby i'm amazed by you" thanks again for the great comments, you really understand my poetry!, even the very deep serious ones, its great to have someone else around whos felt the same:) i'll read more of your gret work later

  • 17 years ago

    by Christen

    This is good. I had a love like this once. We were together for four years. I will always love him and when I talk to him it breaks my heart. But I will never regret leaving him for the fun and loving life I have now. I like the way you described the ways that you love him and the painting of the sky was too cute! Well talk to you soon.
    Love;
    Christen :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    Yes, love can be hypnotizing. Very romantic.

  • 17 years ago

    by shane216

    I like the way you can imagine what is going on wit hyour character and her love. I try to make the reader feel the pain in my peoms and you make me feel the love in this

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