I like the way you can imagine what is going on wit hyour character and her love. I try to make the reader feel the pain in my peoms and you make me feel the love in this

Yes, love can be hypnotizing. Very romantic.

This is good. I had a love like this once. We were together for four years. I will always love him and when I talk to him it breaks my heart. But I will never regret leaving him for the fun and loving life I have now. I like the way you described the ways that you love him and the painting of the sky was too cute! Well talk to you soon.
Love;
Christen :]

Standing on the edge of my life,

coming to the only thing that

has ever felt right,

I hold on tight.
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beautifulllllll poem of love, reminds me of a song i think you'd like called "baby i'm amazed by you" thanks again for the great comments, you really understand my poetry!, even the very deep serious ones, its great to have someone else around whos felt the same:) i'll read more of your gret work later

I love all the personification in the poem; Great use