Hey this was very heart felt. really was strong and purposeful. i accept you for you. the real you. if i know anything bout you.

5/5 David

Danielle hun, this was great! I know what you mean when you said shedding yourself... everyone feels the need to do that when the time comes.
My favorite lines:
I can't live as a mannequin
A fake doll
Having a suffocating
Plaster mask
Isn't how I was meant to live

But they were all really good!
It was well written and a joy to read!
much love hun! xx

xxCiaoxx

I put down this mask
It's stifling and unsatisfying
I take off this skin
It's uncomfortable and fake
I lay myself bare
For everyone to see

Accept ME as I AM

those lines were amazing!! youre a fantastic writer, and i love reading your work... 5/5 from me, and thanks so much for the comment!

I accept you as you are!! It wouldn't be you if you wern't my crazy caffeine addicted friend :P

//Khrystyne\\