Absolutely gorgeous Kim! love it :-)

Kim, this is beautiful! Perfectly chosen words that paint such a sweet image in the mind...

An exquisit piece...very beautiful and uplifting!

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Hum. well i dont really like short poems.. they never seem to have enough substance in them.. also i do not know the outline of a inquain, i think you shoudl have it on the bottom so people can understand more. =]