"Can Oxygen be passes through telephone wires?"

Erm. Did you mean passed? I think I'd make more sense :]

But other than I love this.
Its amazing sweetie.
The idea is so original.
LoooooveLOVE it :]

Yea i agre with Lisaaaaa ur poem rocks

PS" can u have a look at mine

PSS" i am 11

I realllyy loved your poem! Amazing.. seriousllyy! I can totally relate to it..
5/5
take care x